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I am a composer student who also loves writing, both poems, lyrics and stories. Check out my blog about writing and creating my fantasy world: cloudworks.blog.com. English is not my native language, so I would appreciate any comments on both the stories and the language. You can listen to my music at soundcloud.com/jhallcomposer

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Translate   10 years ago

A Night Becomes Day To awake with thoughts of doom Then live through a day of fire and brimstone To finally sleep next to her angelic form; A night becomes day

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    Translate   10 years ago

    M Dreams come and go Will I ever hear those sounds again You, slipping down to me How our horizons merged Into a city of bursting street lights I will never again see Your body waking next to me

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      Translate   10 years ago

      Hush The Tolling Bells There's no funeral today But I can see no wedding procession So hush the tolling bells Hurry, before they hear That's not your tombstone And I don't think the bride has come So hush the tolling bells Hurry, before you rupture

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        Translate   10 years ago

        The Zephyr You stand on the beach, begging Because you want it, you need it You're at the square when you see how it's closing in to sweep you away The Zephyr has nothing to give But that, you can not see You know it's bad for you But you can't let it be On the dance floor you see How it's dancing so you're dancing It passes so fast that you only smile When it chooses someone other than you The Zephyr has gone off somewhere A berth has become cold You will never see it again Sometimes #life is cruel It stands beside you and smile when you're bleeding Just because you're bleeding The larks are singing till they tumble down from the tree where you once laid And nobody answers when the sun has gone down You stand there all on your own

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        Nik Larcombe

        This is great. Really great poetry. Nice one
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        jhall

        Thank you very much! @wolfie
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        Nik Larcombe

        @jhall this is a bit of a fave this week. Written more?
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          Translate   10 years ago

          I Think She Smiled She reached for her panties on her floor I lingered and smelled of the night's embrace She stood and squinted towards Malmö's sun I think she smiled She took a shower, what was on her mind? I said "I'm taking you to Tokyo" I think she smiled Like last night, we argued until quarter to two But she took my hand and led me to her garden I think she smiled *Malmö is Sweden's third largest city.

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