Opusia Logo
  • Home
    • Authors Search Only
  • Guest
    • Login
    • Register
    • Day mode
Dakota Cover Image
User Image
Drag to reposition cover
Dakota Profile Picture
Dakota

I'm new to Opuss, but I love to write. I'm excited to share my ideas with others and get some feedback. Please comment with your feedback.

  • Details
  • 3 posts
  • Female
  • 01-01-70
  • Living in United Kingdom

Photos

No posts to show
  • Timeline
  • Photos
  • Videos
    • Following
    • Followers
Dakota profile picture
Dakota
Translate   12 years ago

My Bucket List 1. Write and publish a novel. 2.Go skydiving/bungee jumping 3. Actually beat a video game 4. Visit another country or travel around this one *these are just some ideas*

React
  • React
  • Love
  • HaHa
  • WoW
  • Sad
  • Angry
Comment
Share
avatar

Dakota

Thanks Atiya for giving me this idea
  • React
  • Love
  • HaHa
  • WoW
  • Sad
  • Angry
· 0 · 1377001829

Delete Comment

Are you sure that you want to delete this comment ?

avatar

Dakota

@groovygoat01 @groovygoat01 @groovygoat01 @groovygoat01 @groovygoat01 @groovygoat01 @groovygoat01
  • React
  • Love
  • HaHa
  • WoW
  • Sad
  • Angry
· 0 · 1377001856

Delete Comment

Are you sure that you want to delete this comment ?

avatar

Atiya

@groovygoat01 Haha its okay , its actually not my idea someone suggested doing it for a challenge
  • React
  • Love
  • HaHa
  • WoW
  • Sad
  • Angry
· 0 · 1377009638

Delete Comment

Are you sure that you want to delete this comment ?

  • 00:00
     
    Dakota profile picture
    Dakota
    Translate   12 years ago

    The Wish Chapter1: The Battle Field I awoke, early. My mouth was dry, but I didn't want to leave the warmth and safety of my bed for the battle field. I turned onto my side and was comforted by the sight of my little sister Lucy to my right. She was mumbling to herself, as usual. She held her blanket tightly in her hands and subconsciously brought it incloser to her body. I coughed and finally got the courage to pull back the covers and climb out of bed. I did it slowly and quietly to avoid waking Lucy. I slowly tiptoed to the door and turned the knob. The door creaked open and I cringed at the sound. I walked slowly into the kitchen where my parents were fighting. "When were you planning on telling them the truth?!" she yelled "Bertha... they're still young. Besides I want them to be happy. Do you know what the truth would do to little Lucy?" She gaped at him. They fought like this every night. I tried to avoid getting out of bed as much as possible, but that could sometimes prove difficult. I went to the cupboard and grabbed a teacup. I placed it under the tap. "What's she doing out of bed?!" My mother snapped. I dropped the cup, which shattered upon impact, into the sink. "Bertha! Don't yell at her! She has nothing to do with this." She sighed, frustrated, and got up from her chair. Her usually neat red red hair was flying out in all directions. I tensed up as I heard her footsteps approach. "Look at what you did you little..." She said grabbing my collar. "Bertha! It's just a cup. They sell them everyday." She released my collar, stormed out of the room and slammed their bedroom door behind her. I flinched and then stood frozen at the sink looking into the mirror above it. I saw myself. An eight year old girl, small for her age, with auburn hair done up in long french braided pigtails , hazel eyes, a million freckles, and rosy red cheeks from crying. I then looked in the direction of my father. He looked frazzled from the events of the evening. His usually spiky brown hair was flat on one side and his blue eyes lacked their usual sparkle and brightness. He took a seat in a chair at the table and put his head in his hands. I grabbed 2 cups and filled them with cold water. I set them on the table in front of him and scrambled up onto his lap. I wrapped my arms around his neck. "Are you okay daddy?" I whispered into his ear. "Yes Bella I'm gonna be alright." He said back then kissed my cheekWe sat in silence together drinking the water and finally he said "How about we get you back to bed?" He placed the cups in the sink, picked me up, and puts in my bed. He tucked the blankets in around me and kissed my forehead before leaving the room.

    React
    • React
    • Love
    • HaHa
    • WoW
    • Sad
    • Angry
    Comment
    Share
    avatar

    MeltyMite

    Why are you not making more? Even without likes you must persevere. Make more and get noticed. I like this story very much. Honest.
    • React
    • Love
    • HaHa
    • WoW
    • Sad
    • Angry
    · 0 · 1377081748

    Delete Comment

    Are you sure that you want to delete this comment ?

    • 00:00
       
      Load more...
      • More info
      • More info
      • More info
      • Following 1

      • MeltyMite
      • More info
      • Followers 2

      • MeltyMite
        Miss._.Hic
      Language
      • English
      • Arabic
      • Dutch
      • French
      • German
      • Italian
      • Portuguese
      • Russian
      • Spanish
      • Turkish

      © 2025 Opusia

      • About
      • Contact Us
      • More
        • Privacy Policy
        • Terms of Use

      Unfriend

      Are you sure you want to unfriend?

      Report this User

      Important!

      Are you sure that you want to remove this member from your family?

      You have sent "Love Your Work" Groovygoat01

      New member was successfully added to your family list!

      Crop your avatar

      avatar

      © 2025 Opusia

      Language
      • English
      • Arabic
      • Dutch
      • French
      • German
      • Italian
      • Portuguese
      • Russian
      • Spanish
      • Turkish
      • Home
      • About
      • Contact Us
      • Privacy Policy
      • Terms of Use

      Comment reported successfully.

      Post was successfully added to your timeline!

      You have reached your limit of friends!

      File size error: The file exceeds allowed the limit (6 MB) and can not be uploaded.

      Unable to upload a file: This file type is not supported.

      We have detected some adult content on the image you uploaded, therefore we have declined your upload process.

      Your post was submitted, we will review your content soon.

      To upload images, videos, and audio files, you have to upgrade to pro member. Upgrade To Pro

      Edit Offer

      0%