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I love to write Soooooo MUCH!!! To me it's like writing keeps all the negative things away like everything that runs through the mind can be on a piece of paper,In a book,A story! When I'm writing I can do anything ?????????

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Random, Weird Story Once apon a time there was a very "Very" happy girl, she worked as a maid in one of the best hotels in the newYork! One day an old man walked in and asked for room 13B, she said that room is under special cleaning (there's bugs). The old man didn't care he wanted the key to the room when the special cleaning was done, he had a hotel home,and he was very happy. A fire started while the cleaners were still in the hotel, the night sky was dark but the half#moonwas bright, people watch as the fire fighters approach the burning bright hotel. The girl was very sad, so sad she ran into the burning hotel with the fire fighters to help whoever is left or trapped inside. The hotel didn't make it but everyone else and her has gotten out safely.

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    Dark Sky's A girl, a girl with short dark hair, she's standing there staring at me, her body it's "it's" Distorted shes so bent out of shape, there's something wrong. The dreams return every night, she gets closer and closer in every dream. I won't sleep for hours knowing some night she's going to get close enough to touch me, what I'm most afraid of is if she's real? Last night I fell asleep earlier than my daily night schedule, she was there face to face (right here,right now) she told me in a misty voice,"Revenge is not the answer, it's forgiveness". I awoke from my dreary sleep and realized that I never talked to my father ~FlashBack~ Ever since he came home drunk and screamed at me to strip or I would regret it later,(and i did.) He hurt me. After that night he went to work, i packed my bags the second I heard the door shut everything i loved was coming with me, i walked out with tears in my eyes the burning sensation that wants you to drop everything you have, get down on your knees and pray..... ~FlashBack over~

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    I'm not much of a comment person so uh hi hope you like the short story I wrote out of the blue haha only took me 27 mins to finish it all so uh um tell me if you like it and will someone please give me some pointers on how to write an amazing horror book because I have nothing
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    Oooo great piece to start with & welcome to opuss ☺✨
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    yikici

    @NaniRivera I suggest, try experimenting with writing horror whilst you're here on opuss, that's what I did with my attempt at horror 'Beyond the Crypt' and found, though I don't find what I write scary, readers here have reassured me its chilling and creepy, so just write and see. Hope that helps. ☺✨
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