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Hi!! I'm just a kid but I love to write!!

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çevirmek   12 yıllar önce

Eternity Jar 7~_~ **All-right, so now Amorita is in this story. This: ~_~ means that it's her POV. I hope you enjoy this chapter!!** Muffled voices swarmed around me. My head ached. I couldn't see. Was I even alive? My eyelids were all swirly and clouded looking. I tried to open my eyes...Ouch! The light was so painful! Just closing my eyes again hurt enough. I couldn't sit up, I could barely breathe; it felt like I was breathing through a straw or an elephant was sitting on my chest. Someone was waking me up. From what I could hear, I think I heard Arcene. She was here!! I couldn't believe it. She was actually here. She... My head hit something hard. My eyes shot open. It wasn't as painful, but all I could see were clouded figures. One said, "Avel! To the right! You're gonna warp car sock..." I couldn't hear right either. One of the figures had blonde hair, long hair in a braid, a fishtail one... The other was orange and had...ears? "I'm tying, knees clothes levy..." Then I knew I was crazy. I tried to move but hands on my waist stopped me. "Chili! Cream sought per spout--" A painful wind knocked me out again.

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    çevirmek   12 yıllar önce

    Eternity Jar 6 ^_^ We walked forever. Every room we crawled over, every crack of light turned out to be the wrong place. I yawned, and Arcene shot me a look. Finally, after a slope going up and a left turn, we saw a room full of scientists under us. Purple tinted wings were spread out, but that was the only thing we could see other than a bunch of heads swarming a big white box with a label that said "Experiment 213". It was Amorita. Arcene knew it, too. She looked at me. "I'll be back, I promise." She took off the pack and lay it next to me. I have her a questioned look. "You're leaving me?" I asked. She kissed me on the forehead. "Avel, I'll be back." I trusted her. I mean, she took care of me for the past two years, and I was like her brother. We were best friends. She wouldn't leave me hanging. She couldn't. And watching Arcene kick open the vent screen made the worst feeling my stomach had ever felt. The screen fell and hit a scientist's big head, probably causing him to see stars. Arcene landed in front of the unconscious scientist and ran towards the box. She turned, seeing the mob of people running towards her. Her hands reached her head, and she started rubbing the sides of her head. One person reached her, but then turned to the door. One by one, the rest of them turned and filed out the door. The room was silent. From the rectangular hole in the ceiling, I heard Arcene whisper to Amorita. "Wake up," she said, folding in her wings for her. She shook Amorita gently. Her eyes fluttered open, then shut. Did they do something to her?

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    Jenna

    Its gettin intense!
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    Tag me in the next one
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      çevirmek   12 yıllar önce

      Eternity Jar 5 **sorry my last one was so short... I promise I'll try to make this one more interesting!!** Was the guard dead? No... His chest rose and fell slowly. Sleeping? His glasses shaded his eyes, so I couldn't see if they were really closed. I tapped the cat-pack twice, code for "Be silent". Creeping up to the last wall before the entrance gate, I was silent myself. I practically crawled to the gate. It had a latch, an easy one, so I slowly and silently unhooked it, slid my thin body in, and closed it. Backing up, I could see that the guard hadn't felt a thing. Nice, Arcene, I thought to myself. I dashed to the exterior wall, looking for a way inside without going through the front door. Looking down, I saw a vent. Perfect. In every action movie/show I've seen, the characters had always climbed in the vent, and I decided I would be able to too. If I could get it open. I jiggled it a ton, but it wouldn't budge. Avel struggled in the pack, and I gave him the signal to come out. He stretched his back, arching it upwards like cats do. "Finally," he grumbled. "Help," I said so hopelessly that I asked a cat. Avel trotted up to the vent, pulled out a sharp claw, and stuck it in the screwdriver hole, and twisted. It looked like it hurt, but it worked, so I didn't complain. The vent cover fell out, and it turned out to be big enough for us both to fit in. We crawled inside. It was dark, except for the little strands of light coming through the cracks. **To be continued... **

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      Jenna

      The suspense!!!!
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        çevirmek   12 yıllar önce

        Eternity Jar 4 ^_^ Under us, I saw a long, white and blue building. "That's it," Arcene whispered. Her feet lightly hit the ground, then she dashed behind the first half-wall. I peeked out from the hole, and I saw that a guard was at the door. "Is he dead??" I asked. Arcene shushed me and crept up to the next wall. I zipped the hole the rest of the way, and squished into an awkward position. All I could do now was hope that Arcene could get in safely...

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        I love the name Arcene!!
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          çevirmek   12 yıllar önce

          I Have A Question About the rank...the lower it is, the better, right? I don't quite understand yet...

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          Yes. Rank 1 is a higher rank than rank 1435
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          Haha okay that's what I thought...Thanks!!@blindsilence
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