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Some questions are best left unanswered, some answers are best left unquestioned. «Alex»

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Nettles A draft for my english exam. Only the opening: They were always there-the mother and her child, even before the sun had chased away the shadows of the night before, enjoying the sun as they watched it’s shimmering form on the gentle river; as it rose above the horizon. Both had found this place a few months back. Back when times were simple and #life was rich and perfect in the mother’s eyes. Unfortunately those times had since passed, so they return here every week, to watch the sunrise and spend the day at their secret stretch or river. Where the birds still sung and the brambles bore berries. Where they laughed and screamed together; as long as they loved each other, they could retain this place of paradise- Where the birds still sing.

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Glen

Like it 👌
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MysteriousPenguin

Is this your controlled assessment?? I'm doing the same Yours is great, what theme did you use??
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«Phoenix»

@MysteriousPenguin I used the story inspired by a poem theme. The poem was called nettles when is your assessment?
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    Translate   13 years ago

    Hi all, I posted a story a while back called "The Blessed Hollow" I would like some feedback and perhaps some improvements, so if you are wondering what to read... I recommend that

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      Translate   13 years ago

      English Exam Ok so here's my problem: I have an English exam where I need to write a story based on a #poem, it could be any #poem. (even some of yours ) so I need suggestions... #poems that make you think, have a good plot, anything, post any #poem you think would make a good story.

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      Claire

      Maybe you could write a story on this poem I wrote "Monsters in the Dark" 😺
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      Jacqui

      I posted a poem 'Vrolok' that was anonymously written in 1906 about vampires and is pretty interesting. Please feel free to take a look
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      One More Night

      On my account @AWriterGirl there's one called Coin Toss... That could be thought provoking
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        Translate   13 years ago

        Where are the opuss washups? The ones who had the fame Who used to be high-rankers But now no-one knows their names.

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        Glen

        Haha they bit the dust mate lol
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        Tom Curtis

        They left Opuss. Some just forgot, or had their own reasons is suppose. Some (eg.AleishaGayle) were caught plagiarising. It's quit.
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        Tom Curtis

        *quite a shame really. Glad to see you're back!
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          Translate   13 years ago

          Young Writers Competition! I'm posting to spread the word about the #youngwritersemotion competition, if you are 14 or under you can enter anything from a short story to song. But all under the emotion "Confusion" full details on @Janflower 's opuss. Happy writing!

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          Vicki

          Thanks for the advertising!!
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          «Phoenix»

          @Janflower no probs
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